{"id":51362,"date":"2018-06-08T14:55:54","date_gmt":"2018-06-08T14:55:54","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/127.0.0.1\/aee\/inappropriate-examples-general-training-letters\/"},"modified":"2023-07-23T13:39:43","modified_gmt":"2023-07-23T13:39:43","slug":"inappropriate-examples-general-training-letters","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/inappropriate-examples-general-training-letters\/","title":{"rendered":"Inappropriate Examples for General Training Letters"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Today you\u2019ll read inappropriate examples from General Training Letters, and learn how to improve on them.<\/p>\n<p>In General Writing Task 1, the <a href=\"\/ielts\/ielts-energy-568-letter-closings-increase-writing-scores\/\">tone and format of the letter are crucial<\/a> for your <strong>Task Achievement score<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>Both of these have to be <strong>appropriate<\/strong> according to the question, regarding the <a href=\"\/ielts\/ielts-sample-general-task-1-informal-letter\/\">audience of the letter and the context<\/a> of the information.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>Appropriate Formal Support<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<p>Recently, a student expressed <strong>concern<\/strong> with a <a href=\"\/ielts\/ielts-energy-556-tones-letters-ielts-speaking\/\">question she\u2019d had on the exam<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>It was clearly supposed to be a <strong>formal correspondence<\/strong>, as it was penned to a <strong>building manager<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>In this letter, the writer was to talk about <em>why she rides a bicycle to work<\/em>, <em>problems with parking it in the building<\/em>, and <em>suggested solutions<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Now, in the <strong>real world<\/strong>, you <strong>wouldn\u2019t explain your reasons for riding a bike<\/strong> in this letter. It\u2019s <strong>none<\/strong> of the building manager\u2019s <strong>business<\/strong>, and has nothing to do with the parking <a href=\"\/ielts\/7-vocabulary-problems-complaining-disadvantages\/\">problems or solutions<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>The reasons this student gave was that she\u2019d <strong>recently gained weight<\/strong> and wanted to lose it, and was told by her doctor that she needed to <strong>lower her blood pressure<\/strong> through exercise.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<h2><strong>100% Score Increase Guarantee with our Insider Method<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/keys\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignright size-medium wp-image-8372\" src=\"https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/02\/3-Keys-IELTS-Box-Shot-900px-OPTIMIZED-FOR-WEB-smaller-version-1-300x293.png?d7aa6c&amp;x42944&amp;1f7936&amp;1f7936&amp;d8026c&amp;d8026c&amp;e79c45&amp;e79c45&amp;862c88&amp;862c88&amp;862c88&amp;862c88\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/02\/3-Keys-IELTS-Box-Shot-900px-OPTIMIZED-FOR-WEB-smaller-version-1-300x293.png 300w, https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/02\/3-Keys-IELTS-Box-Shot-900px-OPTIMIZED-FOR-WEB-smaller-version-1.png 440w\" alt=\"3 Keys IELTS course\" width=\"300\" height=\"293\"><\/a><strong>Are you ready to move past IELTS and move forward with your life vision?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>Find out why our strategies are the most powerful in the IELTS world.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>When you use our Insider Method you avoid the BIGGEST MISTAKES that most students make on IELTS.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.allearsenglish.com\/keys\">Click here to get a score increase on IELTS. It\u2019s 100% guaranteed<\/a>.<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>These are <a href=\"\/ielts\/ielts-energy-410-idioms-healthy-8\/\">personal health problems<\/a>, and do <strong>not strike<\/strong> the <strong>correct tone<\/strong> to a building manager whom, supposedly, you do <strong>not know<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p><em>How can we find an <strong>appropriate reason<\/strong>, then?<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Keep it more <strong>impersonal<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>For instance, you could say that as you are an <strong>eco-conscious<\/strong> individual you <a href=\"\/ielts\/8-ielts-vocabulary-advantages-disadvantages-bicycles\/\">use a bicycle as your main mode<\/a> of transportation. This choice, you\u2019ve found, has made your life more convenient in numerous ways, such as <strong>not having to look for a parking space<\/strong>, saving <strong>money<\/strong> on gas and parking, and making it through downtown <strong>faster than motorized vehicles<\/strong> during rush hour.<\/p>\n<p>So, when you are <a href=\"\/ielts\/brainstorm-8-letter-landlord\/\">brainstorming for your letter<\/a>, make sure that all of your ideas are <a href=\"\/ielts\/video-increase-task-score-general-training-letter\/\">hitting the appropriate tone<\/a>, according to the <strong>intended audience<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Do you have any questions about IELTS Writing?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>Share them in the comments section below!<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Today you\u2019ll read inappropriate examples from General Training Letters, and learn how to improve on them. 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